Wednesday, November 13, 2019

Introduction

The number of teenagers using e-cigarettes is a dangerous amount. The amount of risks that are involved with e-cigarettes are as well. As of 2017 2.1 million middle school and high school students were e-cigarette users (Martinelli). This amount is much more than people smoking actual cigarettes. Furthermore, in December of 2018 37.3% of 12thgraders which is up from 27.8% in 2017. Another research study looked at 771 individuals who used e-cigarettes and found that 69% were male and 2/3 between 18-35, with 16% under 18. The number of teenagers vaping and using e-cigarettes is increasing. It is becoming more and more common to see teenagers with these kinds of things because of the flavors of the juice and the advertisements. They are both aimed towards kids and teenagers even though they are not allowed to be sold to minors. 
            While the number of people using e-cigarettes is increasing and still remains high, so do the number of issues involved with these nicotine devices. We know already that nicotine is harmful and extremely addictive. As of November 5th, 2019, there have been 2051 cases of e-cigarette use associated with lung injury. There are also chemicals such as “ultrafine particles that can be inhaled deep into the lungs” and “flavoring such as diacetyl, a chemical linked to a serious lung disease”. Not only that but there are also “cancer-causing chemicals” and “heavy metals such as nickel, tin, and lead”. All of dangerous and harmful materials make up the devices that people are using. 
            As of November 5th, 2019, there have also been 39 deaths in 24 states and Washington D.C. that have been linked to cases of lung injury from e-cigarettes. There were also 805 injuries reported in 46 states. The chemicals are likely to be inhaled into the lungs and cause “irreversible lung damage and lung diseases”. The Surgeon General reports e-cigarette use among young is a significant health concern and actions must be taken. The chemicals in these e-cigs are not only just harmful to the lungs, but also to the brain. The brain is not fully developed until age 25. The most common users of these devices are teenagers. The chemicals can cause damage. It also makes them more likely to end up using alcohol and drugs more frequently which can create another type of addiction leading to liver problems and possible overdoses. E-cigarettes also cause an increase in heart rate and blood pressure increasing the chance of circulatory problems.
            With all the horrible side effects that e-cigarettes cause and the dangers they provide, one would think that would be enough to stop using. However, the amount is still increasing even after the deaths, hospitalizations, and thousands of people diagnosed with issues traced back right to vaping. So why do kids still do it? Is it easy to access? Is it fun? Are they already too addicted? That is exactly what I want to know and what I found out by surveying college students about their habits of e-cigarettes. 

1 comment:

  1. The introduction does justify why the topic is important by stating that e-cigarettes are dangerous and are being used by teenagers.
    The information is backed up with facts however does not have in-text citations, the topic the writer is trying to explore however is very clear
    The introduction does discuss other related research, The question the writer wishes to answer is also there
    The language is clear and the tone I get from this introduction is a formal Scholarly tone due to the various information throughout.
    Overall I think the introduction is good and provides a reader with background knowledge on the issue.

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